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Mar 22, 2023Liked by C.J. Stone

This may have been the perfect capture scene. Love the way she drops the chains near her, strike fear in her before she goes out. Also love her patience as she lets the net secure her, then the gas to wear her down, then finishes her off with chloroform. Just fantastic.

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Thanks! I appreciate not just the kind words, but that you are reading the story.

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Ladies and gentlemen, at long last, we got her.

Probably won’t have her for long, though.

......No, but seriously, this was quite a tense chapter. Wheldon might not have been able to come through, but Raven certainly did. She came in CLUUUUUTCH. Can’t believe she still doesn’t know about Sapphire’s true identity, but now that she’s at her mercy, Raven will probably get the information she needs sooner or later.

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If it is at at possible, I think Raven both knows and doubts at the same time. The power of the necklace at work, causing a battle in her mind. Much, much more on that to come.

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