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Sep 13, 2022Liked by C.J. Stone

Dang.....this Iegit feIt Iike I was watching a MarveI movie or something. She had the upper hand there for quite a whiIe, but I guess the bad guys came back. Rockford sure got his revenge for Iast time, that's for sure. And someone's gotta attend to Conner soon, or eIse he couId.....

This might be THE darkest hour yet, even beating out the grenade Iauncher scene.

2 (or 3) chapters Ieft! That Iaser's gonna breach the buiIding if we spend any more time on these men!

Is the joke gonna be that the Iaser is on the verge of causing the Ieak, and then it suddenIy stops, with Raven casuaIIy waIking into the controI room and saying she just hacked it?

We're in the home stretch! LET'S GO!

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