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I don't think that you are including anything inappropriate. But the thing you do well is not to add gratuitous violence. This plugs a lot of media elements today. So, I don't think you need ask yourself if "it is too much". I don't think it is. I think it is always just enough. And the devleopment of your character in the contest of a "real person", is very good. I've always wondered what goes through the mind of "heroes", as they discover themselves and accept the mantle of who they've become. Keep exploring, keep writing. If you have a Patreon, plus let us know. Best regards!

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