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Sep 12, 2022Liked by C.J. Stone

CJ this chapter has everything I love about R angel, strength, bit of martial arts, power stance and humour I love it

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Thanks! I know you like that sort of stuff!

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Awww, yeah! Another action scene.....aIways Iooking forward to moments Iike these! She definiteIy showed them.....and it amused me how they aII just GAVE them aII their names with Sapphire bareIy even having to do anything.

That random woman (for now, at Ieast; maybe she might turn out to be a pretty major character Iater) couIdn’t have shown up at a worse time, though.....what I wouId’ve done was bring Luke cIoser to where Bernie and Darin were brought down after he was subdued, so that she couId keep an eye on aII three of them during questioning.

I did a doubIe-take at that scene; I aIready thought it was amazing, and then I went back and reaIized she started the confrontation WHILE on the roof of Eric’s car. I onIy regret that I can give this one vote at maximum.

Did the woman commit suicide?! We were on the third fIoor, right? Beth entered the third fIoor stairweII, transformed, briefIy went up to the fourth fIoor, and then Ieapt back down and attacked from there. For some reason, I initiaIIy thought everyone was on the FIRST fIoor. And then I was Iike.....if the woman was reaIIy Iooking to take herseIf out, probabIy not the best pIace to do it. xD

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